Tears turned to fire and burnt my face so deep
Save me now my sire, wipe them as I weep.
I weep in the rain, thou will never see them flow
But scars will remain, blessed to me by friendly foe.
Friendly foe of mine, o tears burning deep
Vanquished I am thine, fallen now I sleep.
a (deep) visualizing experience has been produced which,i feel, make every reader feel as if it was happening with them right at d time of reading it. i loved d way u used d word-'friendly foe'
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